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Why it’s Important to Write Right in the Legal Profession – And 5 Common Writing Pitfalls to Avoid

Tuesday, March 9th, 2010

The following article, by Brenda Bernstein, was first published on MyLegal.com.

This past September, a federal judge in Florida denied a lawyer’s motion (without prejudice, so he can re-file the motion) stating that it was “riddled with unprofessional grammatical and typographical errors that nearly render the entire motion incomprehensible.” Click here for the full article.

The judge highlighted the following problems, among others:

• Incorrect use of apostrophes.

• Typographical errors (using the word “this” instead of “thus” and the word “full” instead of “for”).

• Incorrect placement of periods and commas outside of quotation marks.

• Wrong word use (using the phrase the plaintiff “had attended on filing” this action, instead of saying the plaintiff had “intended” to file an action).

• One very long sentence.

Don’t let this happen to you!

If you write legal documents in any way, shape or form, it is absolutely essential to use correct spelling and grammar. In a famous case in England, a traffic ticket was thrown out because it was issued for illegal “stoping” instead of “stopping”; the alleged perpetrator had conducted no mining activities (“stoping” is a mining term) and so was found not guilty. I bet that police officer never issued another “stoping” ticket.

Past or Present?

One extremely common error I see amongst law students is using the word “lead” to mean the past tense of “lead.” This mistake could get you in trouble, since the past tense of “lead” is “led” (with no a). You could be writing in the wrong tense!

Example or Complete List?

Another place you can easily convey the wrong meaning is with “i.e.” and “e.g.” When you use “i.e.” it means “that is” or “in other words.” The proper way to follow “i.e.” is with a definition or complete list. For example: The defendant was charged with illegal stoping, i.e., mining activity. “E.g.” means “for example.” The proper way to follow “e.g.” is with a partial list of possibilities. For example: The motion was denied for bad grammar, e.g., typographical errors and wrong word use. If “i.e.” were used here, we would need to provide a complete list of the examples of bad grammar.

Law or Liberty?

Do you know the difference between a statute and a statue? Statutes are laws. Statues are sculptures. We have statutes of limitations and a Statue of Liberty. Don’t get these confused. You might want to remember the extra “t” for “time” when it’s a statute of limitations, or for “text” when it’s any written law. And you might think of following those statutes to a “T” (or 3)!

Proper Punctuation: Periods and Commas Inside Quotation Marks

To touch on one of the Florida judge’s beefs, periods and commas, in the United States, always go inside quotation marks, even when they are not part of the quotation, e.g., The defendant was arrested for “illegal stoping.” Although there are rare exceptions to this rule, they will probably not appear in legal writing (they are more likely to show up in technical writing). For a detailed discussion of this issue, see my blog posting.

Proper Punctuation: Apostrophes

Many people incorrectly use apostrophes to make plural words. Don’t do it! Did you notice that the plural of apostrophe is NOT “apostrophe’s”? It is “apostrophes”! The plural words lawyers, judges, laws, statutes, DUIs and the 1990s do NOT take apostrophes.

Use an apostrophe “s” to make a singular possessive. The lawyer’s brief was riddled with errors. The judge’s ruling was final.

Use an “s” apostrophe to make a plural possessive. The five lawyers’ arguments diverged widely. All the county judges’ courtrooms contain the latest in audio-visual equipment.

Put your apostrophes in the right place – and avoid annoying the judge.

So Many Chances to Err!

There are multiple ways to make writing errors in legal documents, and I have only covered a few. My most important advice is to proofread and proofread again! Get a second pair of eyes to check your work. If you have grammar questions you want answered, I will answer them to the best of my ability in the comments section of this blog. I look forward to hearing from you…

Happy writing!

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Commas and Semicolons… The Comma (or Semicolon?) Chameleon – by Brenda Bernstein

Thursday, February 18th, 2010

I wrote this article for Sam Diener’s Stuff for Success at his request.  I hope my tips clear up some of the confusion about those pesky commas and semicolons!  Comma (or Semicolon?) Chameleon

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How Long Should My Resume Be?

Sunday, February 7th, 2010

I recently read two good articles on the topic of how long your resume should be.  The first, How Long Should My Resume Be?  is from Great Resumes Fast.  The other, Resumes for Executive Jobs – Tips on Length, Formatting and Style was written by Matthew Rothenberg of TheLadders and posted today on EmploymentDigest.net.   

My guideline is that if you are a new graduate, your resume should be one page if at all possible.  If you have 10 years of work experience, it will probably be two pages.  I recommend always having a one-page resume at the ready if you are expecting to work with recruiters. 

I disagree a bit with the formatting advice from TheLadders.  I do not like underlining or changes in font size as a formatting tool.  I much prefer the option of “Small Caps” which you will find under the font menu.  It’s a great way to create emphasis. 

Remember, even though you probably won’t include graphics in your resume (other than perhaps some nice lines and tasteful shading), your resume is a work of art.  Print it out and make sure it looks professional!  It’s likely that if you used underlines and multiple font sizes you will change your mind quickly about your artistic choice when you look at the document in hard copy.

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Resumes for Recent Grads: Back to the FUTURE

Saturday, February 6th, 2010

In this article written for New Grad Life, I cover the absolute golden rule of resumes:  Write them for your FUTURE.  These tips apply to everyone, not just recent grads.  The article is short and sweet, and contains crucial resume advice.  Resumes for Recent Grads:  The Purpose of a Resume

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Resumes for New Grads: 5 Great Tips to Organize your “Education” Section

Saturday, February 6th, 2010

I wrote this article for New Grad Life so it’s catered to new grads, but a lot of the advice is relevant to anyone who has significant items to include under “Education.”  Of course, if you’ve been out of school for 10 years, do NOT put the Education section first (that advice is for new grads only)!  A possible exception is if you are applying for a job at a university where the name of your undergraduate or graduate institution is the most important credential you have on your resume.  5 Great Tips to Organize Your “Education” Section

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Can You Right Write? 10 MORE Common Writing Mistakes 2 Avoid

Tuesday, February 2nd, 2010

Here’s Part II of my run-down of some common writing errors, posted in Sam Diener’s “Stuff for Success” blog. Read here about how to properly use affect/effect, who/that, less/fewer, and more!  10 MORE Common Writing Mistakes 2 Avoid

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Can You Right Write? 10 Common Writing Mistakes to Avoid

Tuesday, January 26th, 2010

I wrote this article for Sam Diener’s “Stuff for Success” blog.  I cover common errors and tips on how to get them write (umm… I mean right).  Check it out here:  Can You Right Write?

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The “Blog” of “Unnecessary” Quotation Marks

Thursday, January 21st, 2010

Last week I wrote an article about quotation marks, and I did not cover the topic of their overuse.  Quotation marks are often used to “emphasize” a word when they are grammatically unnecessary or incorrect.  Thankfully, another blogger has taken on the gallant task of locating errant quotation marks so that I can take a rest on this one.  I just had to share!  the “blog” of “unnecessary” quotation marks

Also note:  Using ’single’ quotation marks is also not grammatically correct, unless you are quoting something within a quote.  For instance:  Grandma always used to say, “I live every day by the words, ‘A stitch in time saves nine.’”  Single quotation marks simply don’t belong anywhere else.

And thus concludes Part 2 of the Quotation Mark Quandary.

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The Quandary of Quotation Marks (” “)

Sunday, January 10th, 2010

Quotation marks (”  “) are a beloved form of punctuation in the English language, used to indicate a verbatim report on what someone said, and used in a great deal of business writing.  They are often misused.  This article will clear up some misconceptions held by many about proper usage of these marks.

Where to Place Periods (.) and Commas (,) – The United States

In the United States, commas and periods ALWAYS go INSIDE the quotation marks, whether or not the comma is actually part of the quotation.

Here are some examples from some recent discussions on LinkedIn.  Don’t expect this rule to be logical:

  • Correct (in US):  E.g. stands for “exempli gratia.”
  • Correct (in US):  As for [the phrase] “graduating college,” I’m not sure when it became correct.
  • Incorrect (in US):  You are my “go to person”.
  • Incorrect (in US):  I was unaware of the difference [between initialisms and acronyms] until I heard it on the NPR program “A Way With Words”.
  • Incorrect (in US):  “Its” is the possessive form of “it”, and is rare among possessives…

Where to Place Periods (.) and Commas (,) – The UK & Australia

Leave logic to the Brits.  In the UK and Australia, they keep punctuation inside the quotation marks only when it is part of the quotation.  For example:

  • Correct (in UK): I was unaware of the difference [between initialisms and acronyms] until I heard it on the NPR program “A Way With Words”.
  • Correct (in UK):  You are my “go to person”.
  • Correct (in UK):  “Its” is the possessive form of “it”, and is rare among possessives…
  • Incorrect (In UK):  E.g. stands for “exempli gratia.”
  • Incorrect (in UK):  As for [the phrase] “graduating college,” I’m not sure when it became correct…

Punctuating Letter Names

Some grammarians say we should use the logical way of punctuating in the case of letters.  For example:

  • The eighth letter of the alphabet is “h”.
  • Name three words that start with an “e”, and three that start with a “k”.

I prefer to avoid this issue by italicizing the names of letters:

  • The ninth letter of the alphabet is h.
  • Name three words that start with an e, and three that start with a k.

Exclamation Points (!) & Question Marks (?)

When it comes to exclamation points and question marks, we all get to be logical.  If the quote is a question or exclamation, include the punctuation inside the quotation marks.  If it’s not, don’t.

  • She asked, “Which way is it to the theater?”
  • Did she say, “I absolutely love the theater, darling”?
  • I’m so excited to see “In the Heights”!
  • I get chills every time I hear King Richard declare, “Off with his head!”

Semicolons (;) and Colons (:)

Here’s some more good news:  We get to be logical with semicolons and colons too!

  • The following items go in the bin labeled “Paper Recycling”:  magazines, newspapers, envelopes, and clean cardboard.
  • Put magazines, newspapers, and envelopes in the bin labeled “Paper Recycling”; do not put paper towels, tissues, or greasy pizza boxes in there!

(It’s so much fun to sneak a public service announcement into a grammar blog!)

What if I’m Canadian?

All bets are off (or on, as the case may be), in Canada.  Do it the way you think your readers will expect you to do it.  As far as I can tell, you get to choose.

There are many more subtleties to the use of quotation marks, and if you have questions, please ask.  I’m happy to provide my most educated answer.

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The Essay Expert Interviewed on EmploymentDigest.net

Tuesday, December 29th, 2009

What’s the difference between a resume and a LinkedIn profile?  Brenda Bernstein of The Essay Expert answers this question and more on a recent interview posted on Bill Vick’s EmploymentDigest.net.  Interview with The Essay Expert

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